Finally finished up the
serial killer's script. 18 pages, woot! I figure I'll add a bit more humor than is written 'cause the piece is pretty heavy. As a rule I try to have one mildly funny thing per page, unless something particularly dramatic is happening. The last part with the guy feels a little abrupt, I might pad that a bit, maybe add an extra page of dialogue though I'm not sure what else there is to say.
Here's some concept art on what the guy will look like:
rough sketch I realized I have made exactly 52 ATHM pages thus far. That's a year's worth of ATHMs! Gah... craziness.