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Thread: Wooded Path

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    Wooded Path

    Wooded Path

    The snow spills quickly now, the clouds uncurbed
    by warming rays of long departed sun.
    Here and there the wind-smoothed sheet's disturbed
    by tracks that tell where deer and rabbit run.
    I'm not the only traveler this night,
    and nature precursed everywhere I go.
    It seems that other creatures can delight
    in quiet ambulation through the snow.
    I've never been too fond of wintertime,
    especially when white dust fills the air,
    but if the world finds snow to be sublime,
    there's got to be some beauty it can share.
    To me, the frozen flakes were cause to mourn,
    but I'm convinced by nature not to scorn.
    AIM: AndItsAllGone

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    Tom Fonseca is offline Fun & Felicitous PFFA Patron
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    I read this several times, and enjoyed each read a bit more. Especially liked "white dust". Nice work--it shows you put a lot of thought and effort into this one.


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    Ooo, Wry and Watchful, I remember critting a poem of yours many moons ago when Low To Middling existed. I remember telling you you had a good attitude to writing and, I believe, gave you lots of good feedback on the verse you posted. It does me old heart proud to see you posting work of this quality - well done.

    Clive
    Most people ignore most poetry
    because
    most poetry ignores most people.

    Adrian Mitchell

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