Whoa. Hold it right there. Why is it so difficult for some people to read and follow the clearly-posted rules? There are no free rides here; did you really think PFFA is a free critiquing service, existing just for your personal benefit? Wrong: There's a price to be paid to participate here. Read the rules; spend time with them, then with the 6 focused, specific critiques you currently owe to others here in "Experimental." The level of critique required for the "General" and the various "Chaos" forums is explained in this thread; there's also a word of warning regarding critiquing in General and the chaos forums. If and when you've posted 6 acceptable critiques this thread may be unlocked. Don't post any more of your own work until you've paid your debt in full.
In other words:
"Poetry is not a code to be broken but a way of seeing with the eyes shut." -- Linda Pastan