
Originally Posted by
Andrea345
I have to write a sexy poem and I've got a cold
My throat is raw, my eyes are sore and I'm feeling old.
I'm so congested that even if a big breasted woman
were to dance naked in front of me, I'd just sneeze.
Great stuff!
I like the fact that the first two lines are a rhyming couplet, setting up the plausible expectation of another rhyming couplet to end it, and then you don't do it
It acts as a formal corollary to the turn of ideas.
BrianIs
AtYou
I think I think, therefore I might be.