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Great stuff. It's a challenge to handle erotica well, but you have done it.
From "Perversities and Curiosities", to "The Onset of Change", you've captured a set of compelling images and psychological mindsets (images of mind?).
The Limericks are a hoot as well. In past NaPos, I've done the occasional bawdy limerick, and it is a challenge to do it well.
BrianIsAtYou
I think I think, therefore I might be.
cranky person
bill, Brian - thank you for letting me know I've given y'all a lift (smile). Thanks for dropping by.
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Brooding Pterodactyl
Great X-rated stuff. By the time I got to "The nipple popped from her daughter's mouth" I was figuring lesbian incest but then it turned out to be plain lactating extra-marital cunnilingus. You're getting soft. Kidding aside, I loved everything and with this subject matter and the way you can handle a poem you really can't miss.
cranky person
Laughing hard now Larry. Good un. "Plain..."
Fun and felicitous PFFA patron
I admire your bold writing style, Mowing Hay is packed with fresh imagery, I would defy anyone who had read line 1 not to read on!
Fun and felicitous PFFA patron
I like how 'Hay' is so rooted in the natural world. You deal well with processes also, especially in the last stanza (I find it difficult to set them out clearly myself, so find this impressive). What's happening is described clearly but vividly. I really liked, listening to crickets instead of gates.
cranky person
anemone & mjd - thanks so much for dropping by! I'm glad you found something worth reading here.
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Fun and felicitous PFFA patron
Like the variety of pacings and styles you're adopting, using erotica as a pivot. Have a good NaPo Andrea!
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cranky person
thanks all
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cranky person
Mimic & ME - thanks for the laughter and the dropping by! 'preciate it!
cranky person
moving on
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Fun and felicitous PFFA patron
'Marriage Bed'..this line 'until/our years edged paper thin and white' is fabulous. I do particularly like that poem.
'Dress Up', well I love that one. 'Bare/ is so expected'. Hell of a variety of choices there...can't quite make my mind up.
cranky person
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And thanks, Hare, for stopping by
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