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Thread: Anita's Back!!!

  1. 04-02-2014, 04:11 AM #1
    anita.a
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    Anita's Back!!!

    Hi I'm back!!

    I'll try and post some good poems this time around... Keep watching this space...


    Poem 1
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  2. 04-04-2014, 01:24 PM #2
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    Been travelling, Anita, so way behind on fluffing.
    Good to see you... but hey, you missed Day One? I nearly did myself. Be well now.

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    Quote Originally Posted by anita.a View Post
    Hi I'm back!!

    I'll try and post some good poems this time around... Keep watching this space...
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  3. 04-22-2014, 06:29 PM #3
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    Moderaters, can I post from today?
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  4. 04-22-2014, 07:16 PM #4
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    Yep.
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    Let the poem do the talking. Then hide behind it.

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  5. 04-24-2014, 03:42 AM #5
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    With the screeching sound of the viper,
    The migraine smell of the air freshener
    At 40, a speed and age both slow
    I was driving, driving and driving,
    Competing with the Seattle rains!
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  6. 04-24-2014, 03:52 AM #6
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    Come..
    come..
    come..
    come...

    Come forward...
    squat in front of me..
    spread your hands..
    and now the legs..
    hold your breathe..
    now leave it...
    fold your arms...
    bend forward...
    now that's better...


    come again tomorrow...



    from today....




    I'm your new yoga guru!
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  7. 04-24-2014, 11:30 AM #7
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    Good to see you made it, at last.

    I might be a little behind as well. Do as much as you reasonably can, but don't feel the need to knock yourself out.

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  8. 04-24-2014, 03:07 PM #8
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    I like the opening of the first poem, especially 'The migraine smell of the air freshener'.

    I think L3 could use some tightening but the piece has a nice focus.
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  9. 04-24-2014, 04:17 PM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by anita.a View Post
    Come..
    come..
    come..
    come...

    Come forward...
    squat in front of me..
    spread your hands..
    and now the legs..

    (...)

    bend forward...
    now that's better...


    come again tomorrow...



    from today....




    I'm your new yoga guru!

    Ha ha, Anita -- I didn't know where this was leading, but the end is great fun!

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  10. 05-03-2014, 04:06 AM #10
    anita.a
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    Sorry guys, was way too busy to make it to the computer or poetry!
    Cheers !
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