Your first struck home. I liked the specificity of the daughter's things and might want even more (I'm nosey) I feel like I've been going through tubs and boxes of memories forever so your quote got me good. I might borrow it maybe? Anyhow, your soup's made me hungry. It's a pleasure to read your poems again, Donna.
Best,
Annie
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Because, if the poet isn’t careful, meaning has a way of too insistently shouldering its way in, so that we readers then have the meaning but miss the experience.
Christopher Ricks, Introduction to Austin Clarke’s Collected Poems