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Thread: Proko-poetitudes Redux

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    30. Part III - Witch of the Atlas

    The camels, now hobbled by ta'kil,
    had been afraid of the singing sands.
    Astarte had left them, approached
    the red mountain on foot. As if sensing her
    malevolence it sent gusts of dust-laden air
    to greet her, gritty blasts she shrugged aside.

    She had crossed Ez-Zemoul El Akbar,
    the broadest, highest range of dunes on earth,
    to reach this one, for beneath it lay
    the vessel containing the eternal soul
    of the man who spurned her.
    Now she stood before the fortress,
    her mood darkened, the air became still
    because she willed it. In her hand she held
    the bousaadi - the long thin bladed knife
    that would destroy her beloved utterly.

    Deep breaths then, the uttered curse:
    the mountain of rough particles that clung
    to each other by their pointy, gritty nature
    suddenly each became perfectly smooth.
    They sloughed, sagged and flowed away
    to reveal the tiny shrine and its hidden urn
    containing his soul. Her blade glowed blue
    and a streak of vengeance shot from its tip.

    It was done, and having been done,
    was now of no further interest to the Witch.
    She turned away and with a wave permitted
    once again the desert to grow and weave
    the dunes she had so painstakingly crossed.
    Her revenge was a dish best served cold.

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    Geoff, reread entire thread, and still loving the poetry about Tawain, I forgot before to admire Inferno, love the idea of Sisyphus being the hellish muse of perfecting meter, over and over; also never proclaimed the beauty of Aurora, gorgeous, and Just Blow Me, could be punk-rock imperfect, with a few more edges. Also, Easter in Taiwan, the ending, very nice. And Break, excellent emotionally harrowing poem.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arlene View Post
    Geoff, reread entire thread, and still loving the poetry about Tawain, I forgot before to admire Inferno, love the idea of Sisyphus being the hellish muse of perfecting meter, over and over; also never proclaimed the beauty of Aurora, gorgeous, and Just Blow Me, could be punk-rock imperfect, with a few more edges. Also, Easter in Taiwan, the ending, very nice. And Break, excellent emotionally harrowing poem.
    Wow. Thanks Arlene. I am flattered that you simply read my thread,
    but your kind words are most welcome.
    I am glad you liked those works, also some of my favourites.
    cheers,
    Geoff

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