Hey Larry,
an autobiographical note at the close,
if it is,
revealing ambivalence, or a moment of doubt in faith.
touching, maybe beautiful, I like it.
Reminds me of Keats in a way, not the technical quality (sorry),
but the content, Keats wrote:
"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,—that is all
*************** Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know."
- Ode to a Grecian Urn

"a billion mirrors of snow" is also an intriguing image to me.
- the book-darkened office with the empty calls is poignant, even eerie
Sue - is it a generation gap, or just the difference between the enlightened and the educated?
Trigger also echoes Keats for me. This introspection theme is interesting.
Marrow -
Works and Days - has elements I too have written about - the relief from celebration, for instance.
I see a book MS in all of this the lawyer feeling trapped by the quotidian and a little doubt about the meaning of it all, taking refuge in writing and poetry. Sounds like John Grisham a bit.
Memory of Fire - needs more time for me to contemplate
Late - is full of worthy elements to think on, I like that.
Storage - the personification is telling, and compelling. It makes me think on my own habits.

I must go work now but I will read 'em all eventually.
Glad you finished.

cheers,
Geoff