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    Happy NaPo! Welcome back.

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    I have done that too! Glad we both made it this year
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    Shmul editorialized in his little book, live a stone-age life in a blown-glass cave. - Grace Paley

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    1. Background #1

    Background #1

    The mouse curls in his bed, handkerchief for his blanket,
    wooden spools for his bedside tables. He fashioned a chair
    and a frame to hold his mirror out of matchsticks bound
    with thread. All pilfered, no doubt, from the tomcat’s human family.
    He dreams of his next treasure.

    The cat paces the perimeter against these little thefts.
    In the living room, lush window treatments guard
    from fading light. Blinds are shut tight. A sound spooks tom
    whose hair bristles and eyes pop, but the kitchen is empty and clean.
    A blue stool buttresses the corner, the ceramic teapot gleams
    and the metal tea kettle holds its own place of importance –
    perhaps not fancy enough for guests, but an essential.

    A pitcher of some ruby cocktail – gin daisies, maybe – sports
    the glass stirrer. A party of up glasses crowds around.
    These play no part but to shatter. Let the chase begin.

    Last edited by Blythe; 04-14-2016 at 02:55 AM.
    Life consists in being the self-developing whole which dissolves its development and in this movement simply preserves itself. - G.W.F. Hegel

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    The last line makes me smile. Flashbacks to Tom and Jerry.

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    That's exactly it, Tom and Jerry. Great opening line.
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    Thanks 5th column and kristalynn.
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    Water Resistance/The Floating Brain/Learning to Swim

    Water Resistance The Floating Brain Learning to Swim
    You’re always moving through a substance that could kill you
    the world Breath overlays the anxiety of daily motion
    and breath reduces stress Fear draws heavy curtains liquid heaviness
    around you The water-fear invades every hole
    in your face your eyes, nostrils, your mouth even your ears
    You can’t avoid every accident submersion waits for you like the tide pulls toward the moon
    Life consists in being the self-developing whole which dissolves its development and in this movement simply preserves itself. - G.W.F. Hegel

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    The Marvelous Orange Tree

    The illusion requires a precision that turns the magician
    into an automaton. Fingers twist and unwind. Again. Again.
    The mouthpiece says, marvel. Repeat. Repeat. And
    again the same motion at the same breath: clockwork.
    We’ve been wound up around the key of magic, the image
    of setting in motion the fantasies that will save us from the ruined
    and disappeared baubles of our jeweled youth, watchworks smashed
    but still ticking. That’s the heart of us, sold wholly to trickery.
    And with pleasure. Again. And again. But misdirection is a thrill
    that requires more than precision. Speak to us as real people
    that hold our childhoods within our skins – take our hands. Be kind and funny.
    Those child-selves spook at the barest threat, but hook us, oh. We’re yours.
    You’ve taken our prized goods and crushed them to powder.
    We sweat the loss while you loft it up for the crowd to marvel
    at – her beautiful ring, how much did you say it was worth? – the owner’s face
    a sinking and rising buoy, the entertainment unwinding like gears
    in the automaton tree. We watch the orange blossoms flower;
    will the ring bloom out in this odd tempo? Oranges emerge from between
    the dark leaves. It’s gloriously weird. The gloved hand slices one open: real juice spills.
    Pass these around, look at the realness! And finally the orange at the top of the tree
    caves in, releasing two butterflies that lift the missing bauble – how real that loss –
    how fun that it is over, even though we know it will happen again.

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    I must have accidentally erased comment about enjoying cat and mouse chase. Definitely, as noted below or above, reminds me of Tom and Jerry too, not that it's cartoonish, but the bright background, the gleaming colors throughout, more like animè.

    The next, wow, wasn't sure how to read, if it's meant to work both ways, but reading across scary, felt the drowning sensation maybe because of the lay-out as well as the words themselves?

    The Marvelous Orange Tree -- I am at an amusement park? Reminded me of Ray Bradbury, 'Something Wicked This Way Comes,' not 'The Halloween Tree' (because I don't remember reading that). Anyway, fascinating and beautiful. I want to quote something, but would end up quoting the whole thing.

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    Interesting piece on 4/2. This piece is interesting to really explore.

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    Thanks Arlene and Andrea! I appreciate your comments very much. Trying to channel some childhood experiences, and you're making me realize I've gone a bit dark. Ah well, today's is no better, but I'll try for some light tomorrow, maybe.
    Life consists in being the self-developing whole which dissolves its development and in this movement simply preserves itself. - G.W.F. Hegel

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    To the Disembodied Head at Houdini's Broken Wand Ceremony

    To the Disembodied Head at Houdini’s Broken Wand Ceremony

    Halloween is a day to dress as the dead.
    There’s no escaping that. Sorry. But the way your head floats
    sporting that bulbous cap, your lips set in the jelly of pudgy jowls,
    the gravestone adding gravity (sorry, again – is it just gravel? or granite? grayness?)
    bullies one’s sense of humor. We know you’re real. Your eyes shift back and forth, tracking ghouls
    (those are dignified ghosts, which only disembodied heads can identify.)
    Why frown and bob, compeer? It’s 1:26 on October 31st, 1985, and your name reads Eric Weiss.
    Your name is synonymous with magic. Your clean shave over a bowl to catch the oracular whiskers
    forecasts the divine pyramid of your goatee’d compeer.
    All befouled water divulges lies. You float above them, un-goateed and gloating,
    which makes us laugh, which angers you. The water laps a sibylline lyric as it spills
    that only the disembodied can hear, prophesying each death of the crowd that gathers
    to watch the annual breaking of the most famous magician’s wand. Each drop bells one death.
    A bully-magician, Houdini never bargained that there was no word for divine
    that started with ‘b’. Arcane or conjure, decode or envisage, forebode, guess, hunch or judge, interpret, judge, know, learn, mantic, note or obscure or portend or query, read or sage or tell or unravel, visualize, warn, expose, yield, zymurgy. Only the disembodied say, “bully.” Only the disembodied feel, bullied. So, bully to you, disembodied head. Your roundness knows all.

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