Ph'tang Yang Olé Biscuit Barrel

[5th column]

Back... Again...


1.
2.
3. Haiku
4.
5. Tiffany
6. Lost Focus
7. Milestones
8. Foreign Tongue
9. Losing It
10. Life in Sing
11. She Said They Had Doughnut Holes
12. Explain That Again

14. In the Greenhouse
15. Pandora, Pandora
16. Liminal
17. Poemectomy
18. Novella

20. Fade to Grey
21. Haiku
22. 30/30 Challenge
23. Singlish
24. Like Heaven
25.When You're on Poem Number Twenty Five and It Feels Like Poem Two Hundred and Fifty and You've Hardly Been Outside For a Month and You're Beginning to Lose the Plot.
26. Copper Line
27. Free Association
28. Kitty Ditty?
29. Cutting

[Featherless Biped]

That's some fusion cuisine! I'll order thirty.

[merelynn]

Happy NaPoMo!

[5th column]

...

[prokopton]

I am highly amused, 5th,
lured by many fine images, such as,
"the salt eye of the moon,"
and
"blood sucking thief of innocence"
intriguing start.

G.

[Arlene]

Fantastic imagery, and plus you made me hungry. I could smell what I'm guessing is the food she's making. Love "fifteen ankle bracelets," and everything that follows.

[Steven]

Very impressive start, 5th. Not sure I'm understanding it as I should, probably due to my lack of reading, but fine writing nonetheless.

[anenome]

Fascinating, strong start to the month, the unusual names certainly give this an edge as well making me giggle, good luck for the month!

[avalanche]

Wow, very nice !
Shades of Lorca even.....will be looking for this 'un in further incantations....

[5th column]

Many thanks to Gfofe, (glad to induce a grin every now and then), Arlene (As part of your fare for the Dolmas you used to get a shot of lemon water from the driver or conductor that people often ran through their hair), Steven (entirely my fault not yours), anenome (some names have been changed to protect the innocent ), and avalanche (a very faint shade indeed).

[Mike M]

I love "chimed a trail of seeds"
and the rhythm of "The Tide" -
I'm trying to read silently but forced to whisper aloud to myself

[kristalynn]

"this wish for nothing/and also for more." Nicely stated.

[Angela]

5th, so happy to be reading you again.

In your first, I am taken with your Jingly lady. The ankle bracelets are so charming. I love the seed trail. Her pronunciation left me with a grin. I am glad they are stuck in
this life.

Your wandering Gypsy poem is perfect to me. I love every word and I love how it makes me feel. Freedom and longing all at once.

[Dani B]

tis a mean feat to use the C-word in a wistful poem -

- a mortal may pour
moonlight through a god.

this is weird, and I like it.

-d

[Janet]

Sweet, slick line: a mortal may pour/moonlight through a god. Your imagery in both poems is impressive.

I am am a sucker for poems like "Tide". I am amazed how some leaves are still hanging after fall and winter have passed. Anyway. Lovely imagery. So very deep and in the moment.