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Cookie! I am sorry I didn't get over here to comment sooner. Tough NaPo. I have popped in a time or two, though, and your Beach Walk stood out to me.
I like the hushed feeling in this. I could smell the sea. The breeze was stirring my hair. The colors were vibrant. I like how the picture kind of slows down and fades with the pale grass. I like the contemplation here. This is a lovely poem.
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