Oh, so that‘s how you do it!Very cool and sexy little verses.
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Oh, so that‘s how you do it!
Doing crosswords
These are outrageous! "Forget/ I told you that" is funny and coy. Really sexy work. More please
beeswax
Rachael, Steven, Andrea, Emilio, M, Jenlars, Arlene, Bench: A big thanks to each of you for encouraging me on my haiku path. It’s one a day until I run out of inspiration.
Haiku I-III
hawthorne hedges
catch your shirt, tight
little buds
a dew-wet path
to shady copse, forget
I told you that
a mossy ledge
bull rush, periwinkle, tadpoles
skunk weed, pine needles
Bees
Fun and felicitous PFFA patron
Bees, I was wondering how you were going to pull this off, and you did, I never knew nature could be so erotic! This is outstanding,
Emilio
Line Manager
a mossy ledge
bull rush, periwinkle, tadpoles
skunk weed, pine needles
Nicely selected proper nouns, each one has something phallic about it, and the mossy ledge obviously feminine.
one part dandelion
Your haikus already have me reading your thread title in a new light. I love the idea of coupling (tasteful) haiku porn.
Fun and felicitous PFFA patron
Loving these haiku Bees, engorged with innuendos and double entendres. tight little buds made me smile.
Enjoying being led down the, um, garden path.
John
beeswax
Emilio, Steven, Janet, JFN. Thank you for visiting and your kind comments. Sorry, I'm way behind in fluffing. Tomorrow.
Haiku I-IV
hawthorne hedges
catch your shirt, tight
little buds
a dew-wet path
to shady copse, forget
I told you that
a mossy ledge
bull rush, periwinkle, tadpoles
skunk weed, pine needles
stitch an emblem
red-sewn shirt -- shame
you’re badly marked
Last edited by beeswax; 04-08-2016 at 11:25 PM.
Bees
Likes to pretend he's Image Indifferent
Number II made me laugh out loud. Looking forward to see where these go.
beeswax
Thanks Speug. I like when a poem makes someone laugh.
Haiku I-V
hawthorne hedges
catch your shirt, tight
little buds
a dew-wet path
to shady copse, forget
I told you that
a mossy ledge
bull rush, periwinkle, tadpoles
skunk weed, pine needles
stitch a emblem
red-sewn shirt -- shame
you’re badly marked
ash trees intrigue
to hide the moon, twisted
country lane
Bees
back from the dead (NOT!)
I like seeing how this is developing Anne, and how one haiku leads into the next or takes the longer poem in another direction.
You'll have heaps of fun with this
Mari.
Brooding Pterodactyl
Hi bbb-wax,
This is joyous and suspenseful. Consider me a follower.
Larry
Fun and felicitous PFFA patron
This is what I wish I could do, every word an image painting the story.
Fun and felicitous PFFA patron
This is shaping up wonderfully, and I love the idea behind it. I am with larry -- I'll wait expectantly to see what's next!
beeswax
Mari, Larry, Arlene and M. Thank you for visiting and for your kind comments. There is no plan – so the development is as much a surprise to me as it is to you. I’m enjoying the experiment. Also posting the whole group along with the day’s offering, gives me the freedom, I reckon, to do a bit of tinkering with earlier ones. Today I change one word on S4.
Haiku I-VI
hawthorne hedges
catch your shirt, tight
little buds
a dew-wet path
to shady copse, forget
I told you that
a mossy ledge
bull rush, periwinkle, tadpoles
skunk weed, pine needles
stitch a emblem
red-sewn shirt -- shame
you’re badly marked
the ash trees intrigue
to hide the moon, twisted
country byways
convolvulus twines
naturally. Forgot
I promised that
Bees
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