Neil
Well-crafted melancholy, a fine title, and a twist of grammar at the end to spice it up. Nice work all through.
Regards / Dunc
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but say it is my humour
Neil
Well-crafted melancholy, a fine title, and a twist of grammar at the end to spice it up. Nice work all through.
Regards / Dunc
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