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    Oh, Clapham Common... so fascinating!
    And a good companion philosophically to that other Australian Dunc's Anzac Day poem this year.

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    You are surely in Shakespeare and Company in Paris?!

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    Karin I am

    Shakespeare and Company is possibly my favourite bookshop in the whole world.

    Glad you think Clapham Common is a good Anzac Day Companion poem ☺️
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    Welsh Interlude

    Welsh Interlude

    All the way from Oxford to Cardiff
    the man opposite me complains
    "a dog wouldn't travel this way!"
    I stay silent but amused, hoping
    you won't be waiting too long
    because of the delay.
    You seem well and happy, planning
    everything you want to show me.
    The pièce de résistance--Tintern Abbey.
    I draw a long breath, trying to curl my mind
    around so much beauty as the light
    falls onto arches of stone and heightens
    the green velvet of the grass.
    Occasionally you are tired so we don't
    do too much in one day. You tell me
    about being in the library and overhearing
    the staff abusing you in Welsh--
    they'd taken you for a tourist.
    When you reply in the same language
    you don't have to rearrange their faces;
    they do it for you, falling over themselves
    to be more polite. We drink tea
    with a friend in a seaside shack
    after you tell me you are going to take me
    to the ugliest beach in the world, and it is!
    We laugh about it together. It's only later
    I realise that it was an ending.
    You are laid to rest in this land
    that nurtured your mind and if I ever
    come here again I feel certain
    you will be there, around the next bend
    in the road, making the sea grasses dance.
    This time, I'll wait for you.


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    Oh and Dunc, thank you for stopping by and your lovely comments. It's always interesting to me to see which ones stand out to people, and for what reasons.

    You are correct re Latchford Barracks ☺️

    And yes I often think about how desperate he must have been to try that.
    Last edited by Emily Bronte; 04-26-2018 at 07:40 AM.

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    A very enjoyable prose poem Emily. Touching
    Resigned

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    Love Tintern Abbey and this:

    You tell me
    about being in the library and overhearing
    the staff abusing you in Welsh--
    they'd taken you for a tourist.
    When you reply in the same language
    you don't have to rearrange their faces;
    they do it for you, falling over themselves
    to be more polite

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    Welsh Interlude, very beautiful.

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    Neil, Karin, Andrea, thank you so much.

    More desperate catch up efforts today but I'm not giving up this close to the finish line!

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    Regent's Park

    Regent’s Park

    (Another mostly found poem)

    What the tube announcement currently says-
    Alight here for local buses to London Zoo.

    What it should say-
    Alight here to faff away
    half your morning
    trying to find the right bus stop
    before giving up and settling
    for a really long walk
    through the park.


    Which is beautiful anyway. Especially
    with the sun slanting through the leaves.

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    Euston Square

    Euston Square

    It’s the nearest tube station to University
    College London but I spend more time
    in the British Library to escape the cold.
    On arrival I can only pass the ferryman
    for this river Styx with the correct token;
    endless documents that prove I am
    who I am. I nurse my reading
    room card like a newborn baby
    and settle down happily for hours.
    When I get sick of Pret-a-Manger
    sandwiches and soup I wander
    the back streets in Bloomsbury
    where it’s possible to get a hot
    meal for less than ten pounds.
    Sometimes I allow myself
    to imagine winning the lottery,
    ensconced in a studio
    apartment here, reading
    and writing all day. Shouts
    on the street and the shriek
    of sirens bring me back to reality.
    Long after I’ve left
    I still haven’t unsubscribed
    from the British Library
    emails. It’s a little doorway
    to my dreams.

    Last edited by Emily Bronte; 04-28-2018 at 12:16 PM.

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    Me too, the British Library, so beautiful. As is St Pancras.
    So glad you are doing the full 30 of these. A book, at least a chapbook!

    the back streets in Bloomsbury
    where it’s possible to get a hot
    meal for less than ten pounds.
    <3

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    Karin yeah what is it with these British buildings--so ugly on the outside but amazing inside. lol.

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    Hi Emily,

    I've enjoyed catching up with this thread, and the generally friendly and conversational tone of these poems make them a pleasure to read.

    I was tickled by the seeing being phoneless equated with entering the underworld in Russel Square and enjoyed the way you extended the metaphor in what followed.

    Lambeth North returns us to the underworld and paints the underground as a lesser hell realm: the disembodied voices, the lack of human contact amid the oppressive, claustrophobic spaces, crowds of people and alternative topology.

    Loved the close of Westminster: "Heroism can be a whisper barely audible / above the strident trumpeting of those / who want more credit than they deserve."

    Aldgate was informative and interesting and had me off googling -- and for me connected strongly with the underground/underworld sub-theme in your thread. Another side to the underground system.

    I liked Welsh Interlude very much, a touching reminiscence and elegy.

    Only two stops left to the end of the line.

    -Matt

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    Welsh Interlude is really well done, perfectly bittersweet. And now I want to visit the British Library! So beautiful.

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