Anita's Feelings 2018!

[anita.a]

Hello poets, I'm back again!

1) Bliss http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...156#post671156
2) YOU http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...382#post671382
3) Time http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...027#post672027
4) Beauty http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...032#post672032
5) Privacy http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...400#post672400
6) Spring http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...402#post672402
7) Poetry http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...551#post672551
8) Freedom http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...552#post672552
9) The Moment! http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...248#post673248
10) The End! http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...250#post673250
11) That Smile! http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...251#post673251
12) My Roomie http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...345#post673345
13) You & Me http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...442#post673442
14) The Juicy Fruit! http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...935#post673935
15) The Lonely Swing http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...259#post674259
16) A Walk to Remember http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...260#post674260
17) The First Night http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...261#post674261
18) If Wishes were horses.. http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...263#post674263
19) In the name of Beauty http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/showth...404#post674404

[anita.a]

Bliss

It was sheer ecstasy
to hold the bundle of joy
in the cresses of my arms
caressing the little hair.
After the pain-filled
night, and day of sleepiness,
the Euphoria of the new
creation resting in peace
was the 'nirvana'
I was searching for!

[5th column]

'Little hair' Sounds like a name.

[new leaf]

Welcome to another NaPo, Anita.

[Featherless Biped]

Aww, a sweet poem about familial love! Welcome back to NaPo!

[kristalynn]

I like the line break on "new."

[anita.a]

Thanks New leaf, 5th column, Featherless Biped, and kristalynn, for stopping by. Glad you liked some!

[anita.a]

So much for the little
sense of belongingness
of your arms
that I was
a part of eons ago.
Those eyes stroked
me to adore you
more than ever before.

The floods washed away
the album with you
in all its pages.

[Janet]

I can relate to that "nirvana" of holding a newborn child. Nice to read you, Anita!

[Jee Leong]

"Belongingness" is a nice neologism.

[JFN]

Anita, I like your newborn nirvana. little hair makes a nice unexpected focus.

The loss at the end of You is sad indeed. Some things are irreplaceable.

Looking forward to more.

John

[cookala]

heya Anita! I think Bliss does a decent job of capturing the emotional side of birth. You is a good start, but a wee bit too ambiguous. I think there's loss, N's parent, but also there was distance between them - not sure. That's what I mean by ambiguous, but the bones are there. welcome back to Napo!

[avalanche]

Sweet and unexpected, this...

[anita.a]

Thanks Janet, Jee leong, JFN,cookala and avalanche for stopping by. I'm glad you liked some.

[anita.a]

The ticktock of the clock
took me into a realm
of memories of hours
passed by. It seemed
like an era or a decade
since I saw you.
An eternity since
I touched you. But,
the slow ticking
in the silence
of my mind put love
in an infinity loop
transporting me
into a period;
when 'you' and 'me'
were 'us' in a moment
of forever entity.