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    HowardM2 is offline The little guy behind the curtain
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    So far, a series of pieces about the crisis we all are facing, examining various aspects of it.

    "Airborne" -- This piece creates a clear sense of claustrophobia with simple details. Well done.

    "Renovations" -- This one captures well the frustration of the situation.

    "Things Fall Apart" -- The consequences of the situation and the consequent desire to escape into something more distant and elegant.

    "In the Dark" -- The sense of not knowing, of being lost, but of at least accepting that there is something yet to hope for, even if not seen yet.

    "Survival Guide" & "Strategy" -- Both evoke the need to hold on, no matter what.

    It will be interesting to see what these pieces go.
    "Poetry is not a code to be broken but a way of seeing with the eyes shut." -- Linda Pastan

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    Everyone who keeps coming by, and especially those making return visits--thank you so much!!!!!

    Playing catch up on poems again, two going up now.

    I've progressed my way through quite a few threads, still have more to get to over the weekend. I will catch up eventually.

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    Adjustment

    Adjustment

    The girl next to me says
    she is jobless and homeless.
    I ask if she has people to stay
    with and get the usual non committal
    yes. Rack my brains to think who is hiring--
    Coles? Woolworths? Services Australia,
    the rebranded Centrelink?
    Welcome to your shitty new normal.
    How may I help you?

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    Shelter in Place

    Shelter in Place

    There are still people out walking
    but they hesitate to stop,
    not wanting to be questioned
    about where they are going and why.
    Dog walkers are more serene---
    " I have a reason to be out!"
    and every now and then I get a grin
    and a tail wag which brightens my day.
    My Maltese loves the extra company
    at home, and is happy to sit or nap with me.
    Except when she scratches at my door--
    "You're not getting out of walking me
    this morning!" We are all animals now
    learning to exist within the moment.

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    Really feeling that shelter in place right now. Great work!

    AP

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    Mari

    In the Dark the gleam begins within ─ well, with any luck it does. You remind me of my deep breath relaxation technique too, priceless at such times.

    Survival Guide ─ and remember that even if you get the virus, unless your health has already left you vulnerable you may very well get through it. Ebola it ain't.

    Strategy ─ or you could open another bottle of wine, of course. Works for me.

    Adjustment and doing it tough ─ indeed a lot of people directly under money pressure, most like never before. It's funny being a community while having to stand two metres apart, no?

    Shelter in Place and the role of the dog. (As a dog person I sigh in a slightly superior way for the cat folk at this time.) All power to you and your Maltese.

    Stay dogged!

    Regards / Dunc

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    One way to get through this is to write it out. I admire your tenacity in doing that. My gran taught us, "Don't dwell on it,", so my method is to concentrate on anything else in my mind, while going through the necessary motions. Each one copes as one can. Airborne was my favorite, longing embodied in the escaping birds.

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    Hey,
    'welcome to you shitty new normal' it's funny because it's true... and if you don't laugh, you will cry.
    Shelter in place is very perceptive. I especially like the description of the dog walkers and your reaction.

    Hang in there!
    Theoretically Mystical

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    Interesting to see writer's ways of coping with the current reality - some avoiding anything to do with the virus, some going at everything very slant, and some - like yourself - trying to map it out almost as a reflective diary in poetry. All these approaches make a degree of sense. I did particularly empathise with the thought to "curl up forever in the space
    between myself and the world." All the best - one third of the way through already.

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    AuntPunkin, Dunc, Malinda, Gabrielle, and romac--thanks so much. I'm going to try and get around to more threads tomorrow.

    Catch up again, two poems going up now.

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    Liminal

    Liminal

    There is a chasm between
    already and not yet,
    a thin silver rope
    that glitters with rage
    because the world teaches us
    that what we are is not enough.
    The gleam catches my eye again
    and rage turns to laughter.
    Already is always here,
    within the not yet of every moment.

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    Travel Advice

    Travel Advice

    The scene, for your entertainment,
    ladies and gentlemen:
    My father, stuck in the UK indefinitely,
    without indefinite leave to remain.
    My mother and I, phones to our ears,
    trying to break the miles between us.
    The windows are closing even as dad
    runs for the tarmac. When I hear
    he has landed in Sydney, my heart slows
    for the first time in days and I finally sleep.
    Have you been entertained? Why thank you.
    All contributions in these uncertain times
    are most welcome. Goodbye.

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    Easter Sunday

    Easter Sunday

    And [the women] went out quickly and fled from the sepulchre; for they trembled and were amazed: neither said they anything to any man; for they were afraid. Mark 16:8

    I seek stillness.
    Not the eye of the storm,
    or the deadly quiet just before it hits.
    No, I want my self, my soul,
    the thing, whatever it is that makes me
    know what words to put upon the page
    to be Shakespeare’s ever fixed mark
    that looks on tempests and is never shaken.

    Between the idea
    And the reality
    Between the motion
    And the act
    Falls the Shadow


    Instead, another wave smacks me
    Into the next day without asking
    me what other plans I might have had.

    For Thine is the Kingdom

    I need to learn to surf.

    Between the conception
    And the creation
    Between the emotion
    And the response
    Falls the Shadow

    I am afraid, as the women
    on the resurrection morning were afraid,
    for they have taken my Lord away and I know not
    where they have laid him.


    Life is very long

    I’m not used to taking one step forward
    at a time without knowing where I am going.
    I don’t trust the world.

    Between the desire
    And the spasm
    Between the potency
    And the existence
    Between the essence
    And the descent
    Falls the Shadow

    Some days, trust feels like the blind
    leading the blind, seeking someone
    who can give you both directions.

    For Thine is the Kingdom

    For Thine is
    Life is
    For Thine is the


    way of all flesh, the knowledge
    that all our lives are a process of letting go
    of the things we thought we could control.

    This is the way the world ends
    This is the way the world ends
    This is the way the world ends
    Not with a bang but a whimper.


    Amen.
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    "Shitty new normal" is a standout to me.
    "Easter Sunday' an interesting excursion, featuring Yeats I see...nicely caught.

    Av
    wrings his feet

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    Hi, Mari,

    "Shelter in Place" - I like how this starts out with an observation of motives between the people out walking and the people out walking their dogs (which I've seen more doing than I ever have; did dogs not get walked before? : ) and moves to N and her dog and how the different motives have brought us all to the same point.

    "Travel Advice" - My cousin and her husband recently retired from working at a school in Ethiopia, planned before all of this happened, and they weren't sure if they were going to be able to get a flight out. But they did and made it home to their new home in NY, of all places, also planned before all this happened. So, these lines:

    When I hear
    he has landed in Sydney, my heart slows
    for the first time in days and I finally sleep.


    resonated.

    "Easter Sunday" - Instead, another wave smacks me / Into the next day without asking / me what other plans I might have had. A very different Easter than I've experienced, but not so different from the women on that first Easter.

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