HAIKU in Response to One Deep Breath Prompt of 11-04-07
The prompt this week at One Deep Breath is loneliness. These are some of haiku I wrote on the train to and from Saranac Lake in upstate New York, where I visited a retirement residence I'm interested in for myself.
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no trespass sign
the wind pesters
flame leafed trees
* * * *
lowering clouds
held up by scraps of blue
distant mountains
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a fiery tree
alone in the greensward
one man leaves the train
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And here's one that addresses loneliness in it's more enjoyable aspect (at least that's what I projected on to that seagull!):
outpaced by the train
a seagull skimming
the placid lake
‘til next time, keep dreaming,
Roswila
[aka: Patricia Kelly]
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