Thursday, September 30, 2010

The Hunter

Click. Clack. Click. Clack.

The echo of Kristen's boots filled the otherwise quiet hall. A large ornate mirror stood in the middle of the room. She didn't stop to check her appearance nor did she need to. She knew she looked good. Tall leather black boots reached mid-thigh. Shockingly short skirt. Her perfectly toned and tanned stomach was largely exposed by the briefest of bustiers.

She paced impatiently at the end of the hall. Damn it! She thought bitterly. If you don't get here soon, I'm getting started without you!!!

Kristen was too busy fuming at being kept waiting to notice the car pull into the driveway. Suzanne eased herself out of her car, running a nervous hand down her skirt. She checked her reflection in the window, deciding to open one more button on her white blouse. Her blond hair was pulled back into a simple ponytail, feet encased in black patent leather shoes.

Suzanne hurried down the garden path. A low fence ran along the rear of the property. In the middle of the fence, obscured by vines of morning glory, was a door. Suzanne threw it open and quickly made her way down the winding staircase.

She gasped when she saw Kristen. The two women stared at each other wordlessly. Kristen was a vision in black. Pure temptation. All seduction. Suzanne, in stark contrast, was all sweetness and innocence in white.

Kristen's sultry gaze swept down Suzanne's body. She spoke in a voice barely above a whisper, "Are you sure you want to do this?" Suzanne nodded. That was all the confirmation Kristen needed.

She strut down the hallway, not bothering to see if Suzanne followed. It was only when her hand grasped the door knob that she stopped to let Suzanne catch up. Kristen threw the door open, allowing it to slam against the wall.

Kevin startled on the bed. His eyes wide as he took in Kristen, the leather get up, the riding crop in her hand. "You?" he asked, thoroughly confused.

Kristen crossed the room to the bed. She ran the crop along Kevin's cheek. He cringed when the leather first touched his face, but Kristen's touch remained gentle.

Just then Suzanne entered the room. "YOU?" Kevin shrieked. "What the hell are you doing here?"

Suzanne slowly made her way toward Kevin. She bit her lip and ran a shaky hand through her hair. Kristen, catching the nervous gestures, rolled her eyes. The riding crop landed on the floor with a loud clatter. Kristen reached Suzanne in two long steps.

She grabbed Suzanne's ponytail, pulling her close. "Just go with it," she whispered in Suzanne's ear. Suzanne's response was silenced when Kristen's mouth closed over hers. She lost herself in the soft lips pressing against hers, the tongue caressing her own, the hands ripping open her blouse, sending buttons flying.

"Suzanne. What. The. Fuck." Kevin croaked.

"Isn't this what you had in mind, lover?" Suzanne teased. "Didn't you say you wanted to spice things up?"
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This was the conclusion of the story that began here with the Hunt. The middle piece is here with The Hunted.

10 comments:

Matty said...

Oh wow, not the direction I thought this was going.

Which of course is an attribute of a gifted writer. Keep the reader guessing. Unexpected turns.

Brian Miller said...

well you had a fine twist there...not where i thought we were going at all...lol.

check that last bit of dialogue for an extra word.

Unknown said...

WOW. What an ending!

Kathy's Klothesline said...

You are devious! Loved it. I am glad I am catching up and got to read all three entries at once, although, the anticipation was part of it!

Gladys said...

Jamie! There you go again taking me on a trist with twist.

Jaime said...

Matty: I can't be too predictable. Have to keep you on your toes.

Kris: glad you think so

Brian: good catch. thanks. i shouldn't write while falling asleep at the keyboard.

amy: every so often, i do write something other than crime and vampires :)

kathy: devious? i like that

gladys: hey there stranger. i've missed you.

Mike said...

I am with Matty! talk about misleading! I just read part 2 and three together. Nice flow!

Jaime said...

O: quite the compliment coming from the king of surprise endings. glad i could keep even you guessing. ;)

Liz Mays said...

Well, he got more than he asked for, I guess.

Jaime said...

BV: Who knows? Maybe he enjoyed it...