
Originally Posted by
Donner
Brian,
Re:
Media Icons
*faints*
Re:
Media Icons (extended re-mix)
*faints again*
Donner
And I resent the implication that one can write a decent AS while sitting on the toilet. Well, one can. But still. 
I'm fainting myself. The latter version of "Media Icons" is the longest poem I have ever written, as far as I can recall.
My AS is still lost. I cannot find my AS. Probably stick stuck there on the toilet.

Originally Posted by
Harry R
Hey Brian, I’ve read through your thread, and there’s lots of good stuff, but this is still what stands out for me:
My father cannot feel his legs. That hidden sense
we never think about—the body's internal sight of itself
that Police Officers test when you are drunk. Close your eyes,
and touch your nose. Your body knows where are its bones,
its sinews, its tendons—beneath the surface of the skin.
We do not need to see it.
Properly striking.
Thanks, those lines were some that I gave particular care to, because of their central position in the poem, and because of the reality of the situation for my father, who struggles daily feeling half-disembodied.

Originally Posted by
cookala
jeez Brian

, it's amazingly awesome - the sheer girth of Media Icons (remix) is mindboggling, let alone during napo. holy crap. I also greatly enjoyed your tribute to grandpa and Jackie very much. good stuffs all.
Thanks, Cookala. Glad to see you are still reading.
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