College Essay

I am super proud of myself. I sent my first rough draft of my Common Application essay to my college counselor, and he said it was a great start.

This is in contrast to my first college essay attempt. After I sent that one in, my college counselor informed me that I would probably have to start over because it was so bad.

The good news is that I cracked the code on college essay writing. My English teachers always say “show, don't tell,” and they are 100% right. I now understand what they mean by that.

My essay is about my two month exchange student experience in India, which took place last summer. I explain that travel allowed me to expand my perspectives and look at things from a different point of view. I go on to explain the importance of learning about different people and cultures. I end with a call for action to never cease trying to push my boundaries and place myself in uncomfortable situations, whether it be through travel or some other form.

It obviously isn't perfect, but I like it and I'm glad my college counselor thinks it is a good start.