Fated by Alyson Noël

Publisher's summary: Strange things are happening to Daire Santos. Crows mock her, glowing people stalk her, time stops without warning, and a beautiful boy with unearthly blue eyes haunts all her dreams. Fearing for her daughter’s sanity, Daire’s mother sends her to live with the grandmother she’s never met. A woman who recognizes the visions for what they truly are—the call to her destiny as a Soul Seeker—one who can navigate the worlds between the living and dead.

There on the dusty plains of Enchantment, New Mexico, Daire sets out to harness her mystical powers. But it’s when she meets Dace, the boy from her dreams, that her whole world is shaken to its core. Now Daire is forced to discover if Dace is the one guy she's meant to be with...or if he’s allied with the enemy she's destined to destroy.

My take: I’m struggling with my feelings about this one. I think that I would have to say that it was just OK because, as I sit here and try to think about my thoughts while reading Fated, the things that I didn’t like or that bothered me heavily outweighed the things that I liked.

Before I start to blabber about all the things that bothered me, I want to talk about the things I liked. I have to say that I actually really like Alyson Noël’s writing style; her writing is very smooth and compelling. There were also a lot of really unique and amazing scenes that painted very vivid images in my mind, and those I really liked…in particular, one scene that introduces us to the bone collector.

Now on to the things I didn’t really like. While I was listening to the audio of Fated, I wondered if I wasn’t really getting into the story because of the narrator’s voice and reading style, but the more I listened, the more I realized that the story just wasn’t really intriguing me.

The prologue, for one thing, is something that stands out where I thought, “What the heck was that? I didn’t know, nor did I even care to know, what the heck was trying to be said there. Then, throughout the story, I felt like I was reading (listening) to a lot of inspirational speeches. There was also way too much repetitiveness when describing the differences between the two twins, but the repetitiveness probably stood out more just because I was listening to the book instead of reading it.

The last thing I want to mention that bothered me is that there were a lot of missing holes in the story. And the things that I think I would have liked reading about were also missing. For example, when Daire’s grandmother finally convinces her to learn about her power, there’s a period of time that’s totally skipped. Then, when Daire is entering her new school and talking about how she could basically destroy these new bullies with her power, I was left wondering, “What the heck did she actually learn to do with her powers?”

I don’t think that this was a horrible book, and I do believe that there are probably a lot of people who will like it. This is just not something for me.

The Forest of Hands and Teeth by Carrie Ryan

Publisher’s Summary: In Mary's world there are simple truths. The Sisterhood always knows best. The Guardians will protect and serve. The Unconsecrated will never relent. And you must always mind the fence that surrounds the village; the fence that protects the village from the Forest of Hands and Teeth. But, slowly, Mary’s truths are failing her. She’s learning things she never wanted to know about the Sisterhood and its secrets, and the Guardians and their power, and about the Unconsecrated and their relentlessness. When the fence is breached and her world is thrown into chaos, she must choose between her village and her future—between the one she loves and the one who loves her. And she must face the truth about the Forest of Hands and Teeth. Could there be life outside a world surrounded in so much death?

My take: What can I say? I am absolutely pissed off with this book. And I think the ending pissed me off the worst!

I actually loved how the book started. Something tragic happens that turns Mary’s (the main character’s) already strange world upside down. After this horrific incident, Mary has nowhere to turn and is forced to live with a bunch of strange, secretive women…the Sisters who control Mary’s village and who force Mary to become one of them. Mary’s brother really pissed me off when all this happened, and I thought, “How could someone be so cruel?” But her brother wasn’t the only one who pissed me off. Almost everyone Mary loves or considers a friend just abandoned her to this horrible fate…including Harry (who was supposed to “claim” Mary to be his wife)…Travis (Harry’s brother) who was the boy she always had a crush on…her best friend Cas…and, of course, her brother Jed! How could they ALL do that to her?

In the beginning, I was totally rooting for Mary and I actually liked her character. She is determined to leave the town to get to the ocean that she only knows about from the stories that have been passed down from generations within her family (no one else even believes the ocean actually exists!) This obsession with seeing the ocean had me hoping that Mary would actually reach it before the end of the book.

HOWEVER, as the story progressed, her obsession with reaching the ocean ends up really pissing me off! I came to realize that she is more obsessed with this dang ocean than she is with the still living people who love her! I’m now wondering if that’s why everyone abandoned her in the first place to a fate with the Sisters…they already knew what I now think…that Mary is truly and unbelievably selfish!!!

I liked the world that was created with the Unconsecrated (what we would call Zombies); physically separated by fences from the village that Mary lives in. I liked picturing the Unconsecrated constantly trying to break through the gates surrounding the village; imagining their cruel, tortured moans; and visualizing how their bones would break from pulling on the fences and how their faces were easily distorted by just a kick to the face! There is this one really crazy part in the story where an infant Unconsecrated is discovered, and I was thinking, “Who could come up with a story like this?”

I wouldn’t say that there were a whole lot of slow moments in the book because I was intrigued enough to keep reading and I actually really learned to like both Harry and Travis. I think Harry is my favorite character because he was probably the least serious character given the life they had to live and the hopeless situation they were faced with.

But I was so pissed off with the ending of the book that, in my mind, I came up with an ending that would have totally rocked!!! And no, it isn’t necessarily a happy ending. But it made me realize that the story had a whole lot more potential, and I think I could have said I would have really liked it…IF it ended differently!